Friday, May 8, 2020
An Argumentative Essay Doesnt Do It Either
An Argumentative Essay Doesn't Do It EitherAnorexia and weight are an argumentative essay topic that many students will bring up during a discussion about anorexia in our society. The first problem with the argumentative essay is that the content of it is too abstract to convey what people are really feeling. Also, the conclusion is a blanket statement about people's willingness to fight with anorexia.In this type of argumentative essay, there is no depression analysis or motivation needed for the conclusion. It's the abstract premise that all that is needed to fight anorexia is a 'fist'. People who argue against fighting anorexia aren't really fighting it, they're just justifying anorexia.It isn't enough to merely be a proponent of self-esteem arguments. A healthy society should have the ability to care for its own and fight anorexia, rather than letting the disease take over the minds of those who don't understand the disease. Such people are considered ignorant and weak and that i s a dangerous trait for any society to adopt.An argumentative essay is worthless unless it is concrete. It must be so and all the reasoning behind it needs to be able to stand on its own. The problem is that the argumentative essay is not concrete but abstract. People make it abstract to cover a weak opinion but to fight anorexia it needs to be brought down to Earth.The reason that people get an unhealthy society isn't because they are ignorant and weak, but because of how the diseases are treated. People aren't treated because they are helpless, they are treated because they refuse to fight their disease. People, just like children, are treated as if they are dumb and incapable of solving problems. It's important to remember that everyone isn't stupid, but is a child.When people refuse to fight anorexia, the disease takes over their lives. Once anorexia is accepted, it becomes a normal part of a child's life. This is a problem because the disease is self-limiting. It's the same as cutting a child off from their emotions, forcing them to be a robot who doesn't have emotions.If we are going to be a healthy society and not allow the disease to take over people's lives, then we need to speak to them as if they were smart and capable adults. They need to be taken seriously, and challenged by arguments that are to the point, to the point of being intellectual and demanding of an answer. There has to be an argument, if we are going to be successful in combating anorexia.In an argumentative essay, people who are fighting with anorexia don't have the right to think that they are winning. They should ask for proof and evidence. Arguments that don't actually talk about weight loss need to be removed from the argumentative essay. We need to ensure that we fight anorexia and educate our people about how to lose weight, not ignore it.
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